Friday, October 24, 2008

Thesis statement

All though bonnie and Clyde are portrayed now as a sexy romantic couple they are in fact cold blooded murderers. They were a criminal couple during the times of the great depression; these two were the most notorious and wanted during there time. They had many warrants out for their arrest (dead or alive), maintained a 2 year crime spree, robbed over 8 banks.
Bonnie and Clyde are criminals but they do these things for justice and for the greater good. They help the poor and in return the poor holds up the law so that Bonnie and Clyde can escape. These two believe in the charity of the " strong for the weak." Bonnie was bored with her life and out of no where Clyde just came as this super macho man and sweeped her up into her arms. From there on these two engaged there lives into a spree of crime. Sorry to spoil your great moment but this is not the truth. This is 1967 view of bonnie and Clyde that every gets so stuck on. In reality these two were horrible savages. These two killed for their own selfish reasons and were really not no robin hoods. Bonnie is portrayed as some gangster girl but she never really hold a gun in his life. Clyde looks like a macho romantic guy but in real life he has cold heart.

1 comment:

Mr. Ackerman said...

This is a great start. You need to include a post for the introduction and the revised thesis. Please make the grammatical corrections necessary on this thesis and repost.

Grade: Satisfactory.